literature

i've got a smoker's lungs

Deviation Actions

inthespacebetween's avatar
Published:
566 Views

Literature Text

gravity settles along my collarbones
and into the spaces between my ribs,
pulls me closer.
i ask,
"am i going to die?"
and it responds,
"eventually."
i keep coughing up all the words that stick in my throat.
my lungs are trying to expel something but
i don't know what it is and
i'm dizzy from the medication.
i look back at my breathing problems
trying to find a correlation but
all i see are constellations--
no, that's just sp ot t y vision,
am i going to faint again?
i can't breathe, but
that's normal.

inhale

inhaler

exhale

forgetting to breathe may be  p o e t i c
but i never could breathe in the first place.
but i've never touched a cigarette
© 2017 - 2024 inthespacebetween
Comments21
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
angelserum's avatar
the little description just adds even more beauty to this one :heart: