literature

playing with fire

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Literature Text

The fire in your eyes is too dangerous for my wax wings.
I
   am
          f a l  l  i n  g

and they said it would hurt,

said it would
set me on fire

but the burn feels the same as the vodka we inhaled at two a.m. when you were
b
   r     e
               a           k
                                   i  
                                        n
                                                  g

Candles burn as slowly as you burn me.

I hit the tides and the waves

s           me                w
    w           up        o
           a    l    l

and they say in sea salt you

d
  r
   o
    w
      n

in your own blood,

choking on the foreign taste of love.
playing with word and letter placement
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AnubisNightingale's avatar
The word placement to this added so much feelings to the emphasized words themselves. It made me take a moment to look at it while the emotions ran through me. 

I'm going through a binge read of all of your works right now, and it's astounding me how much emotion you can portray in your poetry.